Pitch Feedback

I like the way you tried to engage the group by asking if they would interpret the lyrics.  There is not much action in the original video, which would gain a low mark if an A2 production. How ill you make on better.

I like the consideration of colour and black and white. 

Try to do something innovative and different to get into the higher levels.

Outline the performance element which must be an integral part of the video. Will you use instruments such as the piano in the song?

The song is quite slow paced so consider how this will affect your edit

Why did you choose this song?

Consider issues of representation clearly. You have done this to some extent in discussing labyrinth. Make this explicit.

Try to avoid cliché particularly when doing flashbacks and he suicide element could be trite if not handled correctly

How willyou brand the artist? I need to know more in the web-log

The storyboard is particularly important so ensure that it is thorough